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26 June 2010 @ 10:56 am
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 12/?


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After two, very long years of absence, I'm back!
I know you all must hate me so much! I'm sorry. I had the most horrible writer's block ever. But that's no excuse and I apologize for making you wait SO long. I'll be amazed if some of you still read it.
I can't express how sorry I am and I hope this very long, interesting chapter might cheer you up!
Yours truly,
-Lily.
You know the drill...

F e e d b a c k =
L u u u r v e
 
 
26 June 2010 @ 10:45 am
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 10/?

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First, I'd like to apologize profusely for my two year absence. I've been a very bad author and neglected you. I'm very very sorry. I'd like to say it was writer's block as I felt it was, but still the fact that I didn't let you know or tried to get out of, reflects neglect.
I am VERY sorry! However, I've always intended to finish this story, sooner o later, now or 2 years down the road. But rest assured, I'm on with it.

On with the reading!

Review, review, review!!

F e e d b a c k = L . O . V . E
 
 
Current Location: My kitchen
Current Music: Soccer game in the background
 
 
19 June 2007 @ 12:35 pm
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 10/?
 
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On to Chapter 10!

Review, review, revieeeew!

F e e d b a c k = L u u r v e


Please, people, leave feedback. You all know how much it means to authors!
Suggestions are more than welcome as well!
 
 
07 June 2007 @ 11:38 pm
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 9/?
 
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On to Chapter 9!

Review, review, revieeeew!

F e e d b a c k = L u u r v e 

 
 
15 April 2007 @ 12:57 pm
Title: All About You



Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)



Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.



Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.


Chapter: 8/?

Go on, go on! =D
 
 
 

'There are sad stories everywhere' - title taken from NewS' 'Say Hello'.
Warning - this fiction contains strong language, slash scenes, and some issues that some may find offensive or distressing.
It is done in P.O.V's - Dougie and Harry's.
I don't own McFly and shizz.
And Soph is the author. I'm Soph. xD




This is wrong.
I know it's wrong. I know all too well of how wrong this actually is. I know how wrong it is... but the fact it's so wrong gives it something to be desired.
I give myself 5 seconds before leaning right over the side. Groaning. Gasping.
This is not a sex scene. This is a horror movie. This is the insides of my stomach emptying into what should be used for urinal disposure. If this were a sex scene, there would be no wrongness - only pleasurable screaming, insincere fucking, woman's underwear and white lies of love. It wouldn't need something to be desired for what would be desired would be right there.
I get a weird thrill out of this. OK, so I'm crouched on the bathroom floor, sweating, shaking, shivering. I feel dead. Outwardly, inwardly empty. The pain is something I cannot put into words for the words I own are not so eloquently grotesque as to describe the way I feel right now. I don't even want to put it into words for that will merely intensify the feeling that this is real.
This is real.
So real it scares me.
But something of it is giving me a pleasure. Pleasure very different to sex, very different to what I would usually enjoy. But I like this. I like the control, I like the secrecy, holding something to myself. But my life is a secret. I am not Dougie Poynter, the weird one in McFly. It's an act. I should win an Oscar for my acting abilities.
My face is damp. It is now I realise that I have been crying. I'm such a great actor I no longer know when I am crying or not. The tears have been rolling down my cheeks as the contents of my body have been throwing themselves out of my mouth.
Another lie. I've woven myself a web of lies, each one more developed than the other. Explaining my absences. Lies, for I cannot tell the truth anymore. Lies, like those I have been told my whole life. Lies, like I knew those lies always were.
Lies, just like everything I seem to be saying.
If I had been a stronger person, this might have been avoided. But alas, I am nothing but a failure, and that shocks me right to the core. Truth.
The truth hurts.
A door closes. Shit. I pull myself up and flush after throwing up the last fragment of... whatever it is coming out of me, spraying the air-freshener a few thousand times to cover up the evidence, and then go and lie on my bed flicking the TV on. 'Ghost In The Shell' is just starting as Harry walks in.
"Hey Doug."
"Hey."
He comes and sits on the bed too, watching me watching the DVD.
"...you don't look so good."
"Gee. Thanks." I laugh shakily.
"You know what I mean. You been sick?"
"No. I've been doing nothing all day."
He nods, sliding a hand around my shoulder. I think he knows. I think he can see behind the lies, that there is actually no grain in truth behind what I say. But even if he does know, he says nothing; just ruffles my hair like I'm a small yappy dog as I lean my head into his.
I don't want to lie to him anymore. I don't want to whatsoever. But I don't have a choice. It's either lie or let him know that underneath the exterior, I'm a car-crash waiting to happen. Just another bad TV movie, like the ones where the kids get a disease or something but end up being stars in the basketball team anyway. real life... it isn't a movie. It's not a TV series. It's not a video game. I wish I had a rewind button, a channel-changing button, a reset button. Life doesn't have a song in the background, though if it did, mine would be something like +44's 'No, It Isn't';
"Curse my enemies forever,
let's slit our wrists and burn down something beautiful,
this desperation leaves me overjoyed
with fading lights that lead us past the lives that we destroy..."

That song could be written for me. I am my own enemy. My own life had the potential to be something beautiful though I am far from. I'm desperate... desperate for an escape. And I am destroying my own life.
For I am the wrecking ball that drives into the building nearing collapsing. For I am the natural disaster, wiping out cities and filling the streets with the corpses. For I am the poet who experiences their breakdown in a lonely studio flat.
'Dear Harry, I'm going to ruin my life and drag you down with me, baby.'

 
 
Current Mood: bouncybouncy
Current Music: NewS - Hoshi Wo Mezashite
 
 
07 December 2006 @ 08:30 pm
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 7/?

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Alright, guys! Here it is! I really am very very sorry about my long abscence. It has been a rough time in more ways that one. Thank you all for keeping up with the story! It really means a lot. =D
 
 
30 July 2006 @ 01:43 am

Title: All About You

Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)

Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.

Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.

Chapter: 6/?

 

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Thanks to everyone who prayed and sent their get well wishes for my grandma...I am very pleased and happy to say that she's getting better and the doctor is expecting a recovery of up 90%

=D

So, people!
Please review!!
You know feedback means EVERYTHING to authors!
Suggestions and criticism are also welcomed!
 
 
24 July 2006 @ 09:33 pm

Title: All About You

Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)

Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.

Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.

Chapter: 5/?

 

I'm sorry guys...I wanted to update before anything else happened. I've been busy and stressed out. Plans for a vacation have been shrugged off for the moment because my grandma had a stroke yesterday. We went to see her and I was just as heartbroken as ever. She has always been there for me and I can't imagine the day I will see her gone. I don't really want to. I guess I must learn to understand that our times comer sooner or later.

Even so, please keep her in your prayers.

Love

Lil
 
 
22 July 2006 @ 06:33 pm

Title: All About You

Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)

Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.

Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.

Chapter: 4/?

 

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Review people!!

Authors need feedback! =D

Please, please, review, please!

*sheepish grin* never mind that!

I’m off to Puerto Vallarta next weekend so I’ll upload chapter 5 before then!

 
 
 
15 July 2006 @ 11:06 am

Title: All About You

Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)

Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.

Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.

Chapter: 3(part 2)/?

 

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Alright everyone!!

I know this is going slower than you are used to...please plase bear with me. I promise it will soon become very intense. ;D

 
 
11 July 2006 @ 10:47 pm
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 3(part 1)/?
 
 
 
 
 
REVIEW, people!!
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10 July 2006 @ 12:48 am
Title: Guess This McFly Song #1
Author: JuliaFly
Rating: PG-13 for language and some violence
Summary: Summaries intend to give the story away, therefore this one give the song away.. Therefore, this summary is N/A. :)

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06 July 2006 @ 05:35 pm
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: R...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure.
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 2/?
 
 
 
 
 
Please leave a review...yes?
=D
I'd be more than happy to heard and criticism and suggestions. No flames, though! Please be gentle. This is my first McFly fanfic.

PLEASE READ
These are pictures of the place I have in mind for the story. As you know the environment and place has to be important for the feeling the story are able to give you.

 
 
03 July 2006 @ 10:38 pm
Title: All About You
Author: Your humble servant, LilyMarielle =)
Rating: M...as it will be progressing, I have to be sure. 
Summary: The lads from McFly are exhausted. Their manager has arranged for them a special retreat to a house near a beach. A vacation at last. The house was going to be theirs for the whole summer. Yet, an unexpected habitant, the owner's daughter, arrives with hopes of getting away from life and find moments of peace.
Chapter: 1/?



 
 
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Please leave a review...yes?
=D
I'd be more than happy to heard and criticism and suggestions. No flames, though! Please be gentle. This is my first McFly fanfic.
 
 
 
03 July 2006 @ 09:52 pm

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